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    how to write a persona business letter

    Hello
    Would you please tell me what I should write in introdution, body and conclusion pat of a persnal business letter like complaint?

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    Re: how to write a persona business letter

    Quote Originally Posted by skystar30097 View Post
    Hello
    Would you please tell me what I should write in introdution, body and conclusion pat of a persnal business letter like complaint?
    Your question doesn't make any sense. Could you rephrase it?

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    Re: how to write a persona business letter

    Ok. I want to write a letter of complaint. I don't know how I should intiate and conclude it or what I should say to initiate this kind of letter.

    I hope i'm clear.

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    Re: how to write a persona business letter

    Quote Originally Posted by skystar30097 View Post
    Ok. I want to write a letter of complaint. I don't know how I should intiate and conclude it or what I should say to initiate this kind of letter.

    I hope i'm clear.
    Try writing the letter and we will comment on it.

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    Re: how to write a persona business letter

    Pretend you are talking to the person who can resolve your issue on the phone. What would you say?
    You had a bad experience -- what was it? You want them to do... what? What are the details? Repeat what you want them to do. Say what you will do.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: how to write a persona business letter

    Start with:

    "Dear Sir/Madam

    Re: (for example) Customer Service Issue

    I have a complaint regarding the treatment I received from your Customer Service representative on February 27th 2012."

    Then continue with details of your complaint, what happened, why you are upset, what compensation you want etc. We will comment further when you post your attempt at the letter.

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