Some suggestions including some advice: Please don't begin any future requests with "Hey!".NB! I don`t know form what letters concists of the word "BĂ¶ck" (Frau Anna-Rosa BĂ¶ck)
Motivation letter EVS, March 2012
Name: Marjanne Priidik
Date of birth: 2 May 1993
Dear Mrs. Anna Rosa B?ck,
In this motivation letterI would like to intruduce myself and describe why I would like to participate in your European Voluntary Service project.
My name is Marjanne Priidik. I am eightteen years old
girl,and I live in Estonia. First of all I would like to tell you something about myself. GenerallyI am a friendly and honest girl who is open-minded to new ideas and who is eager to gain new experiences. I am also interested in working with thenew people around meand working with children and young people in ana community where people of different outlooks on life live. I would like to to help young people to become self-confident and independent presonalities. For example, I visit a youth group after school more than twice a week youth groupin my own minorvillage where we share our daily newsactivities and deal ingwith somethingissues together. One of our traditions is, for example, making thepocket mirrors onevery Friday.
I am a student studying in my last year in secondary school and I have now arrived at the point where I have to consider decisions that are important for my future. I would describe
memyself as a helpful, cheerful, positive thinking young girl. Furthermore, helping other people with their problems is very important for me. I think that the most important value in my life is that I try to do the best I can, but also to be happy with my life.
Naturally, I would like to to meet new people, learn a new language and also practice my English too and have some pleasant months abroad which I will always remember. After the European Voluntary Service I want to
startcontinue my studies studying, probably psychology or social work at the university in Estonia.
At the moment, I am
stillliving with my mother, two brothers and two sisters. My other four brothers and two elder sisters, who are already living in their own flat, are part of my life too. My family is a big part of my life and they are supporting me with my plans to stay abroad and help me if I ask them for advice.
My hobbies are especially playing basketball or volleyball, listening to music, taking photographs and doing other sports. In winter also I enjoy skiing or skating and meetng friends. I also like travelling a lot, because I'm very interested in other cultures and countries. I am convinced that all countries have something unique and I want to discover the uniqueness of the country – in this case, Germany
lots ofmany things whichthat motivate sme to participate at the EVS . First of all, I want to get to know a new country and culture. Moreover I want to gain experience for my further lifefuture. I always wanted to engage in social pursuits. I also enjoy doing voluntary work because I want to make myself useful in the world and help others in need.
I will gain confidence and become more self-sufficient as I will live away from home. Nevertheless, I look forward to a new adventure and I am open
dfor every new experience.
I think I will be able to
get a part of thisadjust to this project easily and I will be able to work in thea team with everybody without problems. I am already excited about what will await forme abroad. But I am sure that I will meet new and great people, who will get good friends. :)I am really looking forward to hearing from you!
With kind regards,
Maybe you can give me some advice about how to formalize that motivation letter better. :)) Or something else..
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