I have no idea why you have started each sentence with the "@" sign. It makes no sense.
Start every sentence with a capital letter.
End every sentence with the relevant punctuation mark (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark).
Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
Do not put a space after an opening bracket but do put one before it, and don't put a space before a closing bracket (look at what I have done here).
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