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    Cool Are these sentences fine?

    Hey..
    @I believe love to be a difficult thing?( i want to say love is very difficult thing because it gives pain)

    @The son of the king abandoned the palace after the murder of his father.( a king was killed and he left the palace because it was risky to be there )

    @I don't believe you because you are such an idiot and selfish that can eat his own kids.

    Thanks and regards.

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    Re: Are these sentences fine?

    Quote Originally Posted by Rihan View Post
    Hey..
    @I believe love to be a difficult thing. (I want to say love is very difficult thing because it gives pain.)
    Your sentence is fine although it doesn't specifically explain that you think love is difficult because it causes pain.

    @The son of the king abandoned the palace after the murder of his father. (A king was killed and he left the palace because it was risky to be there.)
    Again, your sentence is fine but it does not give the reason for the king's son leaving.

    @I don't believe you because you are such an idiot and selfish that can eat his own kids.
    I don't believe you because you are an idiot and you are so selfish that you would eat your own kids.
    Is that what you meant?


    Thanks and regards.
    See above.

    I have no idea why you have started each sentence with the "@" sign. It makes no sense.
    Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    End every sentence with the relevant punctuation mark (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark).
    Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
    Do not put a space after an opening bracket but do put one before it, and don't put a space before a closing bracket (look at what I have done here).

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    Re: Are these sentences fine?

    First, I just made a design with the
    sign.
    "@". Second I thought the words between the brackets was not very important so I did not
    start every sentence with a capital letter. Third, the same was with the third.
    Thanks for your suggestions. I will try to follow next time.

    @I don't believe you because you are such an idiot and selfish that can eat his own kids.
    I don't believe you because you are an idiot and you are so selfish that you would eat your own kids.
    Is that what you meant?
    Yes, but I wanted to describe the sentence with (can).
    Last edited by Rihan; 11-Mar-2012 at 15:02.

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