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    Question about sentence

    Hi,

    I'm a picky so-and-so and I'm just wondering if the following sentence would be deemed correct, even though the two words have very similar meanings:

    "...The occurrence of one's fate."

    It's probably nothing, but does this sound correct? Or should "occurrence" be substituted for another word?

    Any response on the matter would be great. Thanks in advance.

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    Re: Question about sentence

    Rather meaningless:fate does not 'occur'...

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    Re: Question about sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by philo2009 View Post
    Rather meaningless:fate does not 'occur'...
    Argh, I had a feeling that it sounded iffy.

    Thank you for the reply.

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    Re: Question about sentence

    It does sound awkward.

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    Re: Question about sentence

    s/fate/destiny/?

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