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The road lead to success is not only zigzag and uneven, but also full of thorns and traps.
 
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Is the sentence unintelligible?
 
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NewHope said:
The road to success not only zigzags and is uneven, but it is also full of thorns and traps.
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Keeping as close to your original words as possible.
 
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