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    Smile Does this sentence make sense?

    Does this sentence make sense? Thank you!

    " It's widely understood that children are unable to control their habit. So they are easily obsessed with TV programs, thus, abandoning study."

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    Re: Does this sentence make sense?

    I would suggest very few changes as follows.

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    Does this sentence make sense? Thank you!

    " It's widely understood that children are unable to control their habits. So they may become easily obsessed with (watching some) TV programs, thus, abandoning neglecting study."

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    Re: Does this sentence make sense?

    Thank you
    Quote Originally Posted by shannico View Post
    I would suggest very few changes as follows.

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    Re: Does this sentence make sense?

    No problem.

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    Thank you

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