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    #1

    the weight deep down inside

    Are the following sentences acceptable?

    Every time in the late night hush, the further I look back, the more I feel the weight deep down inside, evermore failing to let go of what happened. How vexing!

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    #2

    Re: the weight deep down inside

    OK for me.

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