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    simmering with rage

    Is the following sentence acceptable?

    While I was trying my best to restrain my fury and act as if nothing were on my mind, deep in my heart was simmering with rage.

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    Re: simmering with rage

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Is the following sentence acceptable?

    While I was trying my best to restrain my fury and act as if nothing were on my mind, deep in my heart was simmering with rage.
    You need a subject for the last phrase so I would place "I" between heart and was.


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    Re: simmering with rage

    While I was trying my best to restrain my fury and act as if nothing were on my mind, deep in my heart I was simmering with rage.

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    Re: simmering with rage

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    While I was trying my best to restrain my fury and act as if nothing were on my mind, deep in my heart I was simmering with rage.
    That's right.

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