Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Is the following sentence acceptable?
While I was trying my best to restrain my fury and act as if nothing were on my mind, deep in my heart was simmering with rage.
While I was trying my best to restrain my fury and act as if nothing were on my mind, deep in my heart was simmering with rage.