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When I was 11 years old, I went to the pool. Actually, I used to go there all the time. One day, I went there with my brother and my friends; it was a scary day. At 5 p.m. I jumped into the pool and nearly drowned. In this essay, I am going to tell you what happened to me during that incident, and what happened after that. Also, I will talk about whether or not I loved swimming after a couple of months in spite of this accident.
On that day, all people went outside because it was a nice day, but I went to the pool, I was happy there, and I thought that I was a professional swimmer, but in fact, my first performance proved that it was not true, and I did not like swimming anymore. I ran towards the pool and jumped into it, and then I was shocked that I couldn’t swim well so that I sank to the bottom of the pool. At the last moment, my brother jumped towards me and saved me by getting me out of the pool.
However, I had to go to the hospital and stay there for a week. During that time I told myself that I will never again go back to that pool
forever. Indeed, I did not swim again, for a long period of time. Then my own thinking was changed about that idea. That is why I missed the pool and I told myself that I had to swim again. Before I went back, I had gone to someone to teach me how to swim perfectly. I started to learn for five months and since then I loved swimming again, because I managed to gain the skills I needed. .
In conclusion, I loved swimming and I went to the pool once
or more ina week or more. My tip or advice to you reader is do not try to swim if you do not have any background in it.
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