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    Thumbs up Can you tell me whether these sentences are correct? Thank you.

    Can you tell me whether these sentences are correct? Thank you.

    I have a dog whose name is Michael. Last time I was dumped by my girlfriend and I felt frustrated and everyone in this world had abandoned me. But Michael seemed knew what happened. He came to me, licked my hand and saying it's okay. Of course, he didn't speak, but staring into his eyes, I could communicate with him deep into heart.

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    Re: Can you tell me whether these sentences are correct? Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by jiangyueming View Post
    Can you tell me whether these sentences are correct? Thank you.

    I have a dog whose name is Michael. Last time I was dumped by my girlfriend and I felt frustrated and everyone in this world had abandoned me. But Michael seemed knew what happened. He came to me, licked my hand and saying it's okay. Of course, he didn't speak, but staring into his eyes, I could communicate with him deep into heart.
    I have a dog whose name is Michael. The last time I was dumped by my girlfriend, and I felt frustrated and everyone in this world had abandoned me. But Michael seemed to know what happened. He came to me and licked my hand, and saying it's okay. Of course, he didn't speak, but staring into his eyes, I could communicate with him deep into his heart.
    or: "Of course, he didn't speak, but staring into my eyes, he could communicate with me deep into my heart." - which is perhaps more pertinent.

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