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    Post summary of qualifications

    Summary of Qualifications

    Responsible and Hardworking
    Active individual with the ability to get along with all levels of people
    Computer proficient
    Matured disposition; totally trustworthy in terms of discretion
    Highly motivated to achieve set goals
    Equally effective working independently and in cooperation with others

    My Dear teachers,
    Are the punctuation marks that I used correct? Was I able to use the proper wordings in writing qualifications? Should I write "mature disposition" or "matured disposition"?

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    Re: summary of qualifications

    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****

    Hello, Mamen:

    The teachers will be with you shortly (soon).

    I just wanted to point out one "mistake" that immediately grabbed my attention.

    Points 1, 3, 5, and 6 are adjectives (responsible, proficient, motivated, and effective).

    Points 2 and 4 are nouns (individual and disposition).

    May I most respectfully suggest that you may wish to make all of them either adjectives or nouns.


    HAVE A NICE DAY!

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    Re: summary of qualifications

    Quote Originally Posted by TheParser View Post
    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****

    Hello, Mamen:

    The teachers will be with you shortly (soon).

    I just wanted to point out one "mistake" that immediately grabbed my attention.

    Points 1, 3, 5, and 6 are adjectives (responsible, proficient, motivated, and effective).

    Points 2 and 4 are nouns (individual and disposition).

    May I most respectfully suggest that you may wish to make all of them either adjectives or nouns.


    HAVE A NICE DAY!
    Thanks sir... but I really don't know how to restate 2 and 4 for them to become adjectives...

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    Re: summary of qualifications

    What adjective would you use to describe someone who can get along with all levels of people?

    What adjective describes someone who has a mature disposition? Your other adjective is already in the second part of that phrase.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Post Re: summary of qualifications

    Quote Originally Posted by Barb_D View Post
    (a)What adjective would you use to describe someone who can get along with all levels of people?

    (b)What adjective describes someone who has a mature disposition? Your other adjective is already in the second part of that phrase.
    I guess MATURE encapsulates everything.

    Maybe, "Mature with solid disposition and perspective." will do for both.

    Thanks in advance.

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