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    Exclamation correct 25 sentences

    hope you guys are doing very well..

    I have memorized many words I could not use them correctly. i decided to write them in sentence to know how to use them.

    So please i need you guys to correct my sentences, and some of the sentences have no mistake but i need you to tell me how to make it better how to use it in another better way than that.

    1_I heard growl next to my door.

    2_The racism made plenty problems between people.

    3_The racism is the main reason for the troubles.

    4_I hate the person who always complains.

    5_try to develop yourself for everything.

    6__the bridges which are between the countries are produce much money.

    7_Most of foreigner people get a bad impression of the countries which are they stay in it.

    8_ I will guarantee you.you will get your money in a week.

    9_I guarantee him , he will pay you.

    10_the lack of education makes people uneducated.

    11_the lack of money makes your children,s education worst.

    12_the lack of money produces a bad life.

    13_I need a big pan to make enough food for my friends.

    14_I am trying to participate in class to get more grades.

    15_If you decide to produce 10 thousands in a month you can.

    16_I am individual of company owners.

    17_The recommendation from your previous teacher might help you to get an admission from the best university.

    18_I am regret to being in New York.

    19_I am regret to be in New York.

    20_I am regret of being in New York.

    21_I am regret of choosing my school in New York.

    22_Iam grateful to my father for his previous help.

    23_I am grateful to my father of what he did for me.

    24_I need someone revise my essays.

    25_If the dog bothers you scold him strongly.

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    Re: correct 25 sentences

    Welcome to the thread. Muosa.

    We like to help when we can, but please post one question at a time. Threads will become hopelessly confused if different people answer different questions.

    1.I heard a growl next to my door.
    Or: I heard growling...

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    Re: correct 25 sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Muosa View Post
    I hope you guys are doing very well.

    I have memorized many words which I could not use them correctly. I decided to write them in sentences to know how to use them.

    So please, I need you guys to correct my sentences. , and Some of the sentences have no mistake but I need you to tell me how to make it them better how to use it the words in another better way. than that.
    Welcome to the forum. As 5jj said, it's not possible to answer 25 questions in one thread. He has given his suggestion to number 1. Before you start a new thread with question 2, please see the amendments I have made to the first part of your post in red. It is very important to always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular) in written English.

    With regard to the 25 sentences you posted, there is only one sentence which has no mistakes. The other 24 sentences have at least one mistake with one or more of the following:

    - Grammar
    - Verb use
    - Word order
    - Capitalisation
    - Punctuation (extra or missing)
    - Spacing around punctuation

    Look at all your sentences again before you start your next thread with a revised version of sentence 2.

    Thank you.

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    Re: correct 25 sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Muosa View Post
    4_I hate the person who always complains.
    Me too! That's my biggest complaint.

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