Nice work/thoughts. A few suggestions.(I know that I made a lot of mistakes because I want to use metaphors which are different than in polish). So there is an initial part:
The concept of love is universal. It is so broad and multi-dimensional that through the ages we
cannot catchhave not been able to thoroughly examine it orand define it. Some people believe that love is the most important thing in our lives, the only sense we need, the only goal that is worth striving for. Sometimes it makes us behave in an inexplicable and absurd way. Nevertheless we know, maybe intuitively, that we act rightlyproperly. Following this idea we cancould say that aour hearts of a mancan influence us to do everythinganything to love and to be loved. AndBut here lies a question: do we have right to fight for love, in the face of adversity, despite some serious consequences, and forget about everything and everybody? It is love that onlyIs it only love that counts?
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