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    Question Several sentences

    Hi! Would anybody be so kind and help me with several sentences? I would be really grateful.

    I have begun my experience with the stock exchange about a year ago, making use
    of one virtual simulator. After several months I managed to increase the
    initial capital 2.6 times. Since that time I am investing only the real money
    on the stock exchange, making current profits of about 40% of the
    initial capital.

    I don't know why, but it seems to sound very strange. While reading this, I hava a feeling that I made plenty of mistakes.

    Thanks in advance,
    Flubber

    EDIT: If you could also have a look at this...:

    When I was fourteen, I was so delighted with the diversity of certain video game’s fantasy world, I came up with an idea of creating its encyclopaedia. After many months of work, I gathered over 140 A4 pages of all sorts of information. Nevertheless, it was still nothing in comparison with what I aimed to create. Then I realized it is not worth to exert myself for something that no one would appreciate. In spite of the fact that I had abandoned the idea of encyclopaedia, several years later I decided to publish all the materials in the Internet. The website is not yet finished, but I made some screenshots available.
    Last edited by Flubber; 15-Apr-2012 at 11:58.

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    #2

    Re: Several sentences

    Please... Save my life :]

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    Re: Several sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Flubber View Post
    Hi! Would anybody be so kind and help me with several sentences? I would be really grateful.

    I have begun began my experience with the stock exchange about a year ago, making use
    of one virtual simulator. After several months I
    had managed to increase the
    initial capital 2.6 times. Since that time I am
    have been investing only the real money
    on the stock exchange, making current profits
    , currently, of about 40% of the
    initial capital.



    Please see my suggested amendments to your first paragraph above, in red. Please post the other paragraph in a separate thread as it becomes very confusing to try to deal with two different questions in one thread. Also, please do not be impatient and post chase-up messages after only two hours (or at all). Everyone here is a volunteer. It is Sunday. We will get to you when we get to you. Thanks.

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    Re: Several sentences

    Thank you very much for your help and I am sorry. I didn't want to be rude.

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