[Grammar] CV personal letter

[Revoib]

Hi please help, I am sort of lost here.

The question is:
What has attracted you to this position and what key attributes can you bring to it?'

My answer:

"I see more challenge in working in the international market rather than the local Israeli one.
Beyond the standard SEO and marketing abilities, I put an emphasize on thinking out of the box and being creative. My main principle is first understanding the business field of every client, before making the first step.I have the ability to breath and hold every filed that will stand before me as a challenge, and set it a primary goal."

Thank you in advance!
David

 

[billmcd]

Hi please help, I am sort of lost here.

The question is:
What has attracted you to this position and what key attributes can you bring to it?'

My answer:

"I see more challenge in working in the international market rather than the local Israeli one.
Beyond the standard SEO and marketing abilities, I put an emphasis on thinking out of the box and being creative. My main principle is first understanding the business field of every client, before making the first step.I have the ability to breath and hold every filed (I have no idea what you mean by this phrase)that will stand before me as a challenge, and set it as a primary goal."

Thank you in advance!
David

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[emsr2d2]

I have the same problem as billmcd with the sentence he didn't understand. I can't work it out at all. In addition, I would remove the word "rather" from your first sentence. I also think "thinking out[side] the box" is a rather overused term and if you can think of an alternative to use, I would do so.

 

[Revoib]

Hi billmcd,
First, thanks for your help.
Second, what I meant in this sentence is that I have the ability to deal with every marketing subject out there..
In Hebrew it sounds different.
Please advise,

David