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    Thumbs up Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Once I was writing an essay and needed to find some cases of integrated marketing communication to support my argument. The library in my university is quite small, so there was only a few books or journals I could find. Therefore, I had to go to the Municipal Library to find these materials.

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    Re: Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Quote Originally Posted by heyuting View Post
    Once I was writing an essay and needed to find some cases of integrated marketing communication to support my argument. The library in my university is quite small, so there was only a few books or journals I could find. Therefore, I had to go to the Municipal Library to find these materials.
    I have marked in red the sentence which has the only real error. Instead of just giving you the answer, why don't you look again at that sentence and see if you can work out what's wrong with it?

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    Re: Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Apart from the one small mistake you could also say "so I could only find a few books and journals"

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    Quote Originally Posted by richardavie View Post
    Apart from the one small mistake you could also say "so I could only find a few books and journals"
    I was going to mention the word order once the small error had been spotted. Mind you, using your revised wording will remove the part of the sentence with the error anyway!

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    Re: Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Thank you. Here is my resivion: so there were only a few books or journals I could find.
    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    I have marked in red the sentence which has the only real error. Instead of just giving you the answer, why don't you look again at that sentence and see if you can work out what's wrong with it?
    Last edited by heyuting; 16-Apr-2012 at 15:51.

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    Re: Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Quote Originally Posted by heyuting View Post
    Thank you. Here is my resivion revision: so there were only a few books or journals I could find.
    Yes. You spotted the error. As richardavie said, you could replace that whole sentence with "The library in my university is quite small so I could only find a few books and journals."

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