Jenniferhu
Junior Member
- Joined
- Apr 18, 2012
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Dear Teachers,
Please tell me if the following three sentences need a bit of polishing up, particularly words in bold.
1. [FONT="]My English friends, on the contrary, would maintain their “British accent” more evidently while in Australia, and that made me wonder if it had anything to do with a desire to proclaim their identity.[/FONT]
2. It is, of course, inevitable for some outsiders to approach the way this group speaks.
3. [FONT="]Consequently, their learning does not only involve issues with linguistics but, in a larger sense, with ever-changing multiple social identities as well.[/FONT]
Note: This post will be deleted shortly after potential answers have been given and received.
Jenny
Please tell me if the following three sentences need a bit of polishing up, particularly words in bold.
1. [FONT="]My English friends, on the contrary, would maintain their “British accent” more evidently while in Australia, and that made me wonder if it had anything to do with a desire to proclaim their identity.[/FONT]
2. It is, of course, inevitable for some outsiders to approach the way this group speaks.
3. [FONT="]Consequently, their learning does not only involve issues with linguistics but, in a larger sense, with ever-changing multiple social identities as well.[/FONT]
Note: This post will be deleted shortly after potential answers have been given and received.
Jenny