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    Thumbs up Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Attending college isn't a prerequisite for a person to be successful. For example, Mark Zuckberg dropped out of Harvard University and created Facebook, which has a great impact on people. He was named as one of the 100 influential people of the world in Time magazine.

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    Re: Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Quote Originally Posted by heyuting View Post
    Attending college isn't a prerequisite for a person to be successful. For example, Mark Zuckerberg dropped out of Harvard University and created Facebook, which has had a great impact on society. He was named by Time magazine as one of the 100 most influential people in the world.
    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****

    As usual, you have done a great job.

    I have respectfully made a few suggestions in boldface.

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