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    Thumbs up Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Once a youth named Yiling worked three consecutive days in order to finish an essay which was due next Monday. He gave up chances going outside to relax and ate only a little fast food. Even some of his friends advised him to take a break, he ignored them and continued to work.

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    Re: Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Quote Originally Posted by heyuting View Post
    Once a youth named Yiling worked three consecutive days in order to finish an essay which was due the following Monday. He resisted going outside to relax and ate only a little fast food. Even some of his friends advised him to take a break, but he ignored them and continued to work.
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    Re: Can you help me correct three sentences? Thank you!

    Quote Originally Posted by heyuting View Post
    Even though some of his friends advised him to take a break, he ignored them and continued to work.
    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****

    I added a suggested word in boldface.

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