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    #1

    Post Short and important

    This is a follow up letter after a business phone call with a potential client
    Is this correct?

    Hello,
    I attached a file summarising Bob's work and some studio pictures.
    Let me know if you need some more info or anything else, in the meanwhile I feel that we are on the same page.
    Best
    Ron

    Thank you!

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    #2

    Re: Short and important

    It's OK for a quick note. I would break the last sentence into two as it runs on. And I would say "In the meantime..."

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    #3

    Re: Short and important

    I would add a "please" - Please let me know.
    It's very informal. Something a bit more business-like might be:

    I think we have a similar approach to (whatever) and I'm confident we can serve your needs well. I look forward to the prospect of working with you.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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