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    Thumbs up Please help me by correcting these sentences. Thank you.

    My favorite place is Wuming Beach, which is 40 miles from my hometown. The sky is clear blue with various shapes of clouds and the water is cool, around 6 degrees. Walking in the water, the wind will blow water across your ankles and knees. Seeing the beautiful scenery, I am full of happiness.

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    Re: Please help me by correcting these sentences. Thank you.

    Walking in the water, the wind will blow water across your ankles and knees.- Not sure how logical this is- if you're in the walking water, wouldn't your ankles be covered?

    I am full of happiness.- How about T
    he beautiful scenery fills me with happiness
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