Is this sentence correct?
Hello!
"[STRIKE]Each time[/STRIKE] Whenever she did it right, the man gave her a slice of banana.".
I [STRIKE]thinks[/STRIKE] think it should be or it's better to be "..., the man would give...". No, it changes the meaning of the sentence: “Whenever she did it right, the man would give…” - She has not yet received any bananas as she has not done it right so far.
Or in the past: - “If she had done it right, the man would have given….. - She did it not right and she has no chance any more to get any bananas.
Thanks.