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I have two versions of three sentences and I have no idea, which sounds better for a native speaker. Would someone be so kind and tell me? Thanks in advance. Here are the sentences (each of them is uttered by a very old man from the Middle Ages):
1)
- Alas, the only area in the vicinity, where these herbaceous plants grows, are the ruinsin the forest.
- Alas, the only place around this area where these herbaceous plants grows are the ruins in the forest.
2)
- I won’t give her a chance to improve unless I save her now.
- I won’t give her a chance to make amends, unless I save her now.
3)
- And what do you want me to bring from thence?
- And what do you want me to bring thence?
I have two versions of three sentences and I have no idea, which sounds better for a native speaker. Would someone be so kind and tell me? Thanks in advance. Here are the sentences (each of them is uttered by a very old man from the Middle Ages):
1)
- Alas, the only area in the vicinity, where these herbaceous plants grows, are the ruinsin the forest.
- Alas, the only place around this area where these herbaceous plants grows are the ruins in the forest.
2)
- I won’t give her a chance to improve unless I save her now.
- I won’t give her a chance to make amends, unless I save her now.
3)
- And what do you want me to bring from thence?
- And what do you want me to bring thence?
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