I would omit "she."
Teacher, is this sentence OK?
My friend, Xie, works as a translator and she has the opportunity to travel to other countries. I wish I had a job like my friend's.
I would omit "she."
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
I agree it's okay, and wouldn't fault it, but I myself would not use it. I'd be strongly tempted to put a comma before "and" if you keep the repeated subject.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.