Student or Learner
Dear Teacher. Please check if the sentences are correct
1) Mr. Martin A. Anderson who is applying for the position of manger of manufacturing support at your organization requested that I write this confidential letter of recommendation.
2) As a supervisor of manufacturing support Mr. Anderson helped to hire, evaluate, and supervise a team of four machine technicians.
3) Although documentation changes were cumbersome for our engineers, Mr. Anderson brang about needed change without alienating engineers or technicians.