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    Could you correct these short paragraphs?

    Hiteachers,
    Could you correct these short paragraphs?

    It’s very clear. But I think that she doesn't understand you or I think she doesn't read the mails, she goes very very accelerated. (I'm sure the underlined one is completely wrong. It should be, 'She is always very ...)

    Another thing, how did it go on Friday? Can all the people attend the course? Montse is very happy and she liked it a lot.

    Thanks in advance.
    Last edited by learning54; 01-May-2012 at 13:19.

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    Re: Could you correct these short paragraphs?

    Quote Originally Posted by learning54 View Post
    . But I think that she doesn't understand you or I think she doesn't read the mails, she goes very very accelerated. (I'm sure the underlined one is completely wrong.)
    I am afraid that this is meaningless to me.

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    Re: Could you correct these short paragraphs?

    Hi 5jj,
    Thank you for your reply.
    What the person is trying to say is that 'she is always in a hurry, as a result she nevers pays attention to what she does, skipping over the things.

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