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Is there something wrong with this sentence? If so, how can I paraphrase it? Thanks!
And the yawning gap between us is threatening to break us apart ‘til Fate stepped in and became a bridge of love.
So, how can I change it? Should I change /stepped/became/ to /steps/becomes/?
Last edited by Holdy; 08-May-2012 at 17:20.
Guys, thanks for your help!