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    until usage

    Is there something wrong with this sentence? If so, how can I paraphrase it? Thanks!

    And the yawning gap between us is threatening to break us apart ‘til Fate stepped in and became a bridge of love.

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    Re: until usage

    Quote Originally Posted by Holdy View Post
    Is there something wrong with this sentence? If so, how can I paraphrase it? Thanks!

    And the yawning gap between us is threatening to break us apart ‘til Fate stepped in and became a bridge of love.
    The main problem is that the tense in the first half (is threatening) doesn't fit with that of the second half (stepped in/became).

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    Re: until usage

    So, how can I change it? Should I change /stepped/became/ to /steps/becomes/?
    Last edited by Holdy; 08-May-2012 at 17:20.

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    Re: until usage

    Quote Originally Posted by Holdy View Post
    So, how can I change it? Should I change /stepped/became/ to /steps/becomes/?
    You could, or you could change "is threatening" to "was threatening". It depends what you want to convey.

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    Re: until usage

    Guys, thanks for your help!

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