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    plese check my pragraph and kindly correct its pronounciation ( please its urgent)

    Dawn News English Channel some remarkable memories

    I really donít like to watch TV channels but once I was taking morning tea before going to university my some friends watching Morning show at Dawn English News Channel. At that time, I was inspired from this English news channel. I love to read Dawn newspaper but it was my tremendous experienced on their channel. I didnít miss the First Blast, A taste of fusion and No reservations.
    I learnt a lot from Dawn News English Channel. I Really missed this channel even I recommend my friends to watch Dawn English News Channel for improving their English on you tube but here the question is why this channel couldnít run. What were the reasons behind their progress It was the first Pakistani English channel that focused on Carrier counseling related programs I wish to see again this channel on screen in future.

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    Re: plese check my pragraph and kindly correct its pronounciation ( please its urgen

    Your tenses make this almost impossible to follow.

    You don't like TV.
    Once you were with some friends watching TV.
    You didn't miss a few TV shows
    You missed the channel.
    You wish to see this channel

    I can't tell what happened first, but by starting with "I don't like TV" you are saying you don't like it now.

    Please take a look at this passage again and pay close attention to tense.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: plese check my pragraph and kindly correct its pronounciation ( please its urgen

    In addition to Barb's very relevant comments, please note that we can't check your pronunciation as in order to do that, we would have to hear you speak the words in your piece.

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    Re: plese check my pragraph and kindly correct its pronounciation ( please its urgen

    thanks for your kind instructions. I said in first line I don't like to watch tv channels but once I inspired from one tv channel that was Dawn news channel but after few years the channel closed. now I wish to send this paragraph to tv channel owner. please I am not good in English kindly assist me on this matter,
    thanks
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    Innocent Lady
    Al Saudi Bank KSA

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