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    Can I remove "because" in this sentence? And please check these sentences are correct

    Q3:Could you remove "beause" below the sentence and make sentence?
    "In the most recent case, two man drowned because they jumped into the river to save a friend recklessly even though they didn't know how to swim"

    Q4:Please check these sentences are correct.
    Recently, the celebrities visited Japan for official event.
    Recently the celebrities visited Japan for official event.
    The celebrities visited Japan for official event recently.
    The celebrities recently visited Japan for official event.
    Lately, the celebrities visited Japan for official event.

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    Re: Can I remove "because" in this sentence? And please check these sentences are cor

    Quote Originally Posted by Jungjou View Post
    Q3:Could you remove "because" in the following sentence?
    "In the most recent case, two men drowned because they jumped recklessly into the river to save a friend recklessly even though they didn't know how to swim".


    No - because is essential. You could leave it out if you put a semicolon after 'drowned'.

    Please start a new thread for Q4 as it is unrelated to the above.

    Rover

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