These are the sentences from a student's homework assignment with my corrections:
'The Board of Directors has agreed the following investment plan:
1. First of all, we should set up a factory in the US. The US is one of the most profitable
and desiredmarkets. It will provide us with a huge cash flow andnew clients and help generate considerable cash flow This will give us a enormousand profit in manufacturing chocolates in a major new market.'
Do the corrections make sense?
Thank you in advance.
Last edited by vectra; 26-May-2012 at 20:45. Reason: second thoughts