vectra
Member
- Joined
- Jun 16, 2005
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Ukraine
- Current Location
- Ukraine
Hello,
These are the sentences from a student's homework assignment with my corrections:
'The Board of Directors has agreed the following investment plan:
1. First of all, we should set up a factory in the US. The US is one of the most profitable [STRIKE]and desired[/STRIKE] markets. It will provide us with [STRIKE]a huge cash flow and[/STRIKE] new clients and help generate considerable cash flow [STRIKE]This will give us a enormous[/STRIKE] and profit in manufacturing chocolates in a major new market.'
Do the corrections make sense?
Thank you in advance.
These are the sentences from a student's homework assignment with my corrections:
'The Board of Directors has agreed the following investment plan:
1. First of all, we should set up a factory in the US. The US is one of the most profitable [STRIKE]and desired[/STRIKE] markets. It will provide us with [STRIKE]a huge cash flow and[/STRIKE] new clients and help generate considerable cash flow [STRIKE]This will give us a enormous[/STRIKE] and profit in manufacturing chocolates in a major new market.'
Do the corrections make sense?
Thank you in advance.
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