Could you please correct the 2 very short texts (I'm an international student applying to the US), they must be in perfect english.
1/ I aspire to become a physicist, that is someone who possesses the tools necessary to understand and change the world we live in. Therefore, I plan to major in physics.
2/ I went on to a 2-year college preparatory course for the French Grandes Ecoles (French engineering universities). I quit the course at the end of the second year to pursue a business project and that is what I have donc since. Please refer to the "my notes" section in part 2 of the application for more information.