Student or Learner
I am non native English speaker
I need to submit an abstract but do not think it is good.
Could you please help me edit it
Last edited by yaeldc; 01-Jun-2012 at 05:43.
Welcome to Using English.
There are some tweaks to make to the first part, but once you get to "As an alternative," I am unable to understand your meaning at all. It leaves me completely mystified.
In the first part, delete "Furthermore." Change "Nevertheless" to "However." What are the limitations and exceptions in? Copyright law? Whose literature? The noun "determining" takes the singular verb "remains." But then... I have no clue.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.