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A piece of friendly advice - we like to deal with one thing at a time on this forum. You have posted ten individual sentences and your title is "Please correct these sentences". That suggests that you believe there is something wrong with each sentence.
We like you to do some work first so please let us know what you think might be wrong with each individual sentence. It is a lot easier if you put each individual sentence in its own thread to be dealt with separately. It can get very confusing if people are dealing with different sentences.
As shown in the forum guidelines, your title thread should contain all or part of the phrase you are querying so for example, your first thread could have been:
Title: of how I used to go
Text: Could you please tell me if the following sentence is correct? "Tonight the moon is full which it reminds me of how I used to go fishing for flounder with my uncle". I'm not sure about the use of "reminds me of how I used to go".
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