Results 1 to 3 of 3
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Chinese
      • Home Country:
      • China
      • Current Location:
      • Canada

    • Join Date: Aug 2010
    • Posts: 516
    #1

    are these sentences correct?

    Teacher, please check for errors. Thank you.


    I received a call from John's girlfriend who wanted to know when his birthday was. She wanted to plan a party for him. She asked me not to tell John that she had called today to ask about his birthday.

  1. a_vee's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • Costa Rica

    • Join Date: May 2012
    • Posts: 93
    #2

    Re: are these sentences correct?

    The words are all used correctly. Nice job. I hope I am not overlooking something, but they seem really good.

  2. Barb_D's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • American English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States

    • Join Date: Mar 2007
    • Posts: 19,221
    #3

    Re: are these sentences correct?

    You could put a comma before "who."
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

Similar Threads

  1. Are these sentences correct.
    By scott833 in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 10-Dec-2009, 05:30
  2. are these sentences correct
    By scott833 in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 09-Dec-2009, 11:48
  3. Replies: 1
    Last Post: 25-Jun-2009, 03:06
  4. please correct my two sentences
    By Zoe2008 in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 27-May-2008, 15:45
  5. Correct English-urgent request to correct sentences
    By Anonymous in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 12
    Last Post: 28-Nov-2006, 19:25

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •