You can post it in the Editing & Writing section, not in this section. However, do not have high hopes about anybody editing it. People help on this forum in their free time and free of charge and since editing and proofreading is usually hard time-consuming work, few posts are answered. If you want, on the Internet, there are a lot of options to have your writings proofread by professionals (not for free of course).
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