Hi Leute,
also ich weiß, worüber wir unsere Englischarbeit schreiben. Ich hab jetzt auch schon die Aufgabe, jetzt muss ich "nur" noch einen guten Text schreiben. Ich bin nicht gut in Englisch, also wäre nett, wenn jemand meinen Text verbessern/korrigieren könnte. (möglichst schnell) (;

Die Aufgabe:

Community service for everybody?

Everyvody should have to do 12 months of community service after leaving school.
Write a text of at least 200 words on this topic. Your text should include the following points:
- arguments for and against
- examples to support your arguments
- your personal opinion

Das hier ist mein Versuch:

Community service is a good thing, but in Germany it's now voluntary.
So there is the question, if everybody should have to do 12 months of community service after leaving school.

On the one hand you can help people, when you for example do community service in a rest home. You can make the
people smile and get job experience. You learn responsibility, you have the feeling of beeing needed, the handling of human. What do you want more? Besides you are social, this is very good if you want to apply for a job.

But on the other hand you maybe don't like the work or don't want to. After leaving school you don't have many time, because a studium or work. If you do one
year community service you so to speak lose one year, which you better had used for training. And the job experience would you also get, if you would make a training.Finally the worst thing at community service is, that you don't become money and you need money after leaving school.

To come to a conclusion there are better arguments against community service for 12 months after leaving school. In my opinion you can get the experience in
12 months of community service also, if you make a training, or not? And then you don't become money, so you can better make a training then do community service.