Could you correct this short paragraph about the movie 'Dirty Dancing'?
The plot in this film is about a family that goes to a hotel for their summer vacation. Baby, the daughther, is bored. One night while she is listening to the music from a party that takes place near where she is, she decides to go there.
Baby meets Johnny Castle, a dance instructor. She is instantly attracted to him.
As days go by the dance together to prepare a special dancing.
They love each other very much, but their social differences kill their love relation.
Thanks in advance.
It's a "resort" not just a hotel.
These movies are often called a "coming of age" movie in which one of the characters makes the transition to adulthood.
This is a coming-of-age movie about a teenage girl, Baby, on vacation with her family at a summer resort.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
Please be aware that I'm neither a native English speaker nor a teacher.