Could you correct this short paragraph about the movie 'Dirty Dancing'?

[learning54]

Hi teachers,
Could you correct this short paragraph about the movie 'Dirty Dancing'?
The plot in this film is about a family that goes to a hotel for their summer vacation. Baby, the daughther, is bored. One night while she is listening to the music from a party that takes place near where she is, she decides to go there.
Baby meets Johnny Castle, a dance instructor. She is instantly attracted to him.
As days go by the dance together to prepare a special dancing.
They love each other very much, but their social differences kill their love relation.

Thanks in advance.

 

[billmcd]

Hi teachers,
Could you correct this short paragraph about the movie 'Dirty Dancing'?
The plot in this film is about a family that goes to a hotel for their summer vacation. Baby, the daughther, is bored. One night while she is listening to the music from a party that takes place near where she is, she decides to go there.
Baby meets Johnny Castle, a dance instructor. She is instantly attracted to him.
As days go by they dance together to prepare a special [STRIKE]dancing[/STRIKE] dance (OR dance routine).
They love each other very much, but their social differences kill their love relation (OR relationship).

Thanks in advance.

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[SoothingDave]

It's a "resort" not just a hotel.

 

[Barb_D]

These movies are often called a "coming of age" movie in which one of the characters makes the transition to adulthood.

This is a coming-of-age movie about a teenage girl, Baby, on vacation with her family at a summer resort.

 

[learning54]

These movies are often called a "coming of age" movie in which one of the characters makes the transition to adulthood.

This is a coming-of-age movie about a teenage girl, Baby, on vacation with her family at a summer resort.

Hi,
Could you tell me the reason to use '... a coming-of-age ..' with hyphens to talk about the movie and not with the definition?

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[charliedeut]

Hi,
Could you tell me the reason to use '... a coming-of-age ..' with hyphens to talk about the movie and not with the definition?

Learning

HIi

I understand it is because "coming-of-age" is used as an adjective for "movie".

Greetings,

charliedeut

 

[learning54]

HIi

I understand it is because "coming-of-age" is used as an adjective for "movie".

Greetings,

charliedeut

Hi,
Thank you for your help. So, it is a modifier, a group of compound words, for 'movie'.

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