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    Please correct my sentences

    1-Joe must approve the purchase of software licenses.

    2- All websites are allowed upon approval from the CFO

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    Re: Please correct my sentences

    1- Fine
    2- grammatically correct, but it seems to repeat the idea- if approved, doesn't their being allowed follow naturally? All websites must be approved by the CFO???

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