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    Please check my paragraph

    Mad man advertising has practically turned morbid. We are living in a new era of
    communication. Where only one thing is constant i.e., CONVERGENCE, that leads to the fusion
    of different media, morphed into an entirely new medium.


    That’s why we do not believe in ‘thinking out-of-the-box, but prefer putting an end to the
    box itself’. As definition of each medium is changing rapidly, it intensifies complexities in
    communication. Hence we simply defy definitions which make us the most desired hub for
    brands who wish to establish connection with modern consumers.

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    Re: Please check my paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Mad man advertising has practically turned morbid. We are living in a new era of
    communication. Where only one thing is constant i.e., CONVERGENCE, that leads to the fusion
    of different media, morphed into an entirely new medium.


    That’s why we do not believe in ‘thinking out-of-the-box, but prefer putting an end to the
    box itself’. As definition of each medium is changing rapidly, it intensifies complexities in
    communication. Hence we simply defy definitions which make us the most desired hub for
    brands who wish to establish connection with modern consumers.
    Do you want to know if it's grammatically correct or if it makes any sense?

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    Re: Please check my paragraph

    I want to know both specially the sentence :

    CONVERGENCE, that leads to the fusion of different media, morphed into an entirely new medium.

    that leads or which leads

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