I have to write essay and i have to react to this statement: "Fifty years from now, life will be much easier and healthier for ordinary people than it is today." I would be really happy, if you proofread my text.
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I agree with the statement above. In my opinion,
thelife will be very much different by now. You can havelook inat the past. Before50 years ago there waswere not any cell phones, internet, computers and numerous other stuffsthings. ThisThese inventions changed the world. They improved the living standards and especially, they connected and moreglobalized the world. ItThese advancements contributed to the sharing of information s betweenamong thecountries. TheInventions improved theeducation, health care, environment etc. Of course there waswere bad impactnegative impacts of the invetions too, but i am convinced that there were more positives than negatives. In my opinion, there will be the same progress to better life and world like wasthere were in the past. I believe, that in the next 50 years it will be about change, change in the usinguse of energy. I think that we will use more solar, nuclear and water energy. In my vision we will drive solar vehicles, because theoil will run out. TheThermal power stations will disappear. It will help the environment and our health too. We will use the gadgetmaterials and techniques, which will be usedforalmost foreverything from paying in theshops, phoning to unlock ingyour car. It is my vision. Do you think, that it is utopia? I can only say: We will see in the future.
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