[Grammar] Can someone plz edit these few words for me :)

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EK082

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when you share an interest between you and your enemy against a biggest enemy you will say : dear enemy, you have been missed

I know its sound understandable just plz try to fix it ;-)
 

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Welcome to the forum, EKO. :hi:

Please try to use capital letters and standard English forms; see my amendments, below:
[STRIKE]w[/STRIKE] When you share an interest between you and your enemy against a bigg[STRIKE]est[/STRIKE]er enemy you will sayno space: [STRIKE]d[/STRIKE] Dear enemy, you have been missed."

I know it[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] sounds understandable; just [STRIKE]plz [/STRIKE] please try to fix it.
The first part is not natural English. This is a little more natural:

When you and your enemy share an interest against a bigger enemy, you will say, "Dear enemy, you have been misssed."
 

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I know the expression "The enemy of my enemy is my friend." I don't agree with it much, though!
 

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Thank you very much 5jj, :)
Bard - Yes YOU are right however i do agree with it ;-)
 
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