[Grammar] Is "previously had got chronic lung infection" used properly here? If not

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Edit it please:

The patient is a 40-year old female, previously had got chronic lung infection, was attacked by acute liver pain 3 hours ago.
 

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Re: Is "previously had got chronic lung infection" used properly here? If not

Edit it please:

The patient is a 40-year old female, previously had got chronic lung infection, was attacked by acute liver pain 3 hours ago.

The patient, a 40-year-old female, who previously suffered from a chronic lung infection, started to experience acute liver pain three hours ago.
 
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