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GhettoNerd

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Dear Sir or Madam

APPLICATION FOR THE POSITION OF CUSTOMER SERVICE SPECIALIST

As a technical support mentor with excellent qualifications and a strong desire to excel in the field of customer service I am seeking to align myself with an expanding company positioned in Berlin.

With more than 2 years of experience in customer service I have developed excellent skills that are effective at satisfying customers, solving problems and communicating relevant information.

I am seeking an opportunity where my experience and computer literacy can benefit your company. With this goal in mind, I have attached a résume outlining my qualifications,


  • Outstanding problem solving skills with the ability to handle rapidly changing processes
  • Excellent organizational, interpersonal and communication skills with the flexibility and experience required to remain highly focused and self-possessed in fast-paced, demanding environments.
  • A hands-on team member who is accurate, positive and who can quickly learn new systems, develop useful expertise and produce significant result-oriented contributions.
  • Exceptional ability to work under pressure while maintaining a high standard in personal defined targets.

I would be grateful for an interview to discuss the specific ways in which I could help your company. I am available from August. My salary requirement is in the €18,000 - €25,000+ range. Until then, thank you for your consideration and I look forward to meeting with you.

Yours sincerely


Enc
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billmcd

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Dear Sir or Madam

APPLICATION FOR THE POSITION OF CUSTOMER SERVICE SPECIALIST

As a technical support mentor with excellent qualifications and a strong desire to excel in the field of customer service I am seeking to align myself with an expanding company positioned in Berlin.

With more than 2 years of experience in customer service I have developed excellent skills that are effective at satisfying customers, solving problems and communicating relevant information.

I am seeking an opportunity where my experience and computer literacy can benefit your company. With this goal in mind, I have attached a résume outlining my qualifications.

This is a summary of my personal skills which include:

  • Outstanding problem solving skills with the ability to handle rapidly changing processes
  • Excellent organizational, interpersonal and communication skills with the flexibility and experience required to remain highly focused and self-possessed in fast-paced, demanding environments.
  • A hands-on team member who is accurate, positive and who can quickly learn new systems, develop useful expertise and produce significant result-oriented contributions.
  • Exceptional ability to work under pressure while maintaining a high standard in personal defined targets.

I would be grateful for an interview to discuss the specific ways in which I could help your company. I am available from August. My salary requirement is in the €18,000 - €25,000+ range. Until then, thank you for your consideration and I look forward to meeting with you.

Yours sincerely


Enc
1 CV
1 Letter of references

Excellent. You're hired. :up: See suggestion above.
 
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