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    Are my sentences correct?

    Have I written the following sentences correctly and all the forms are possible or not? Thanks in advance.

    A) In this meetings, they sat against the vast ocean and chatted for hours; talked from the art, economics, politics, from the war and love.

    B) They sat against the immense ocean and chatted for hours in this meetings. They talked from the art, economics, politics, from the war and love.

    C) They sat against the endless ocean and talked for hours in this meetings. They spoke of the art, economics, politics, of the war and love.
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    Re: Are my sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tinkerbell View Post
    Have I written the following sentences correctly and all the forms are possible or not? Thanks in advance.

    A) In this meetings, they sat against the vast ocean and chatted for hours; talked from the art, economics, politics, from the war and love. Not really good, poor choice of terms/words.

    B) They sat against on the edge of the immense ocean and chatted for hours in thisthese meetings. They talked from the about art, economics, politics, from the war and love.

    C) They sat againstby the endless ocean and talked for hours in this these meetings. They spoke of the art, economics, politics, of the war and love.
    Some possibilities.

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