Student or Learner
Is this sentence OK? Do I use the present perfect tense correctly?
We received a letter from the insurance company yesterday and they have offered to give you $10,000 for your expenses. Can you call my Manager to discuss this?
Except there is no reason to capitalize "manager."
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.