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Do you think that this sentence could be improved by including the preposition "in"?Three years later, Rick turned to me from this very same spot. “My
eyes were more open that day than they ever had been with him. I
loved my son dearly. But until that day, my mind was always six
hundred places. I’d never focused on him one hundred percent.”
In addition, I would add some more information:But until that day, my mind was always in six hundred places.
Or was the original sentence fine as it was?But until that day, my mind was always in six hundred different places at the same time.