Student or Learner
What is wrong with this sentence? I mean grammar, lexis and everything else. Since that day when two brothers set foot on the Earth, an internecine war has never ceased. (It is again about gods and mythology)
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
(Not a Teacher)
The sentence sounds ok. The "the" before "Earth" isn't necessary, though. I'm not sure exactly what war they are referring to in the second part. The war between God and Satan? Warfare in general among mankind? If they're going for the latter, they should remove the "an" before "internecine".
I just want to know if I'm the only person who had to look up "internecine."
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
I see nothing wrong with it at all.